Adding Depth to Character Backgrounds

Creating characters can be a lot of fun, provided you avoid developing a Mary Sue character you’re overly attached to. Heavily-idealized and pet characters are hard to kill when they need to be and can be burdensome on the reader. The side effect to creating a Mary Sue character is your reaction to the situation when someone doesn’t like your work. I’ve seen many writers get more defensive because that character means something to them that goes above and beyond the call of: “Well, I love my work.”

Gaming has helped me create well-rounded characters; there are some games, like Spirit of the Century, that focus on themed characters. (In this case, pulp.) Even within gaming, though, the character you design is rarely at the end of their journey. They always–relationships, career, aptitude, skills, etc.–have room to flourish.

Backgrounds can be even more difficult because, on the surface, it may be hard to design one that isn’t blah and boring. In the U.S., we base a lot of opinions on what someone does for a living. So career is often a big factor in determining a character background. Not so everywhere else in the world. While the “job” is a bucket that people can relate to, it’s not everything. Once the job is determined, I’ve seen some authors immediately default to childhood background as a way of fleshing out character motivation. Even then, many stereotypes are often derived from a troubled teen, an abused child, a runaway.

To get around the stereotypes, some authors develop characters using tarot cards. Corrine Kenner has an online Tarot for Writers workshop. On the surface, the structure is what I’d expect from such a course. Others, like myself, take a page from astrology in a different way.

Element Encyclopedia of BirthdaysThe book I’ve listed in this post is called, The Element Encyclopedia of Birthdays. When I’m stuck developing a character, I turn to this resource and sift through the pages.

Because this book is based on a calendar year, there are three hundred and sixty five different characters to choose from as opposed to a book of archetypes, which traditionally has between six to forty-eight. Within each entry, there are additional opportunities to drill down and add depth. A typical entry isn’t just a list of attributes, it tells a story about the person born on that particular day. Take August 19th, for example. This is the “Day of the Editor.” Let’s call this guy “Bob.” Bob’s greatest challenge is revealing the real you. Positive and negative attributes are listed, along with a prompt for self-improvement. Image is important to those who share his birthday. Although Bob’s detail-oriented, in part because he’s deeply insecure, if he’s able to move past looking at everything as an opportunity for his own self-interest, he can find courage and free himself from his troubles.

As an author I say: “Wow, this is great inspiration!” So, a character who’s heavily focused on image might believe that even the smallest secrets can hurt her reputation — even though that might not be the case. There’s a certain amount of self-delusion that can come across to the reader in good dialog, romantic relationships, etc. In Bob’s character background, I’d develop trends of behavior based on common misunderstandings. No one else feels Bob is this terrible awful guy, but he’s pretty sensitive about innocuous comments. Maybe he’s switched careers a lot. Maybe he’s had trouble in relationships. Maybe he’s only had one job and works in the basement. Maybe he’s in a crappy relationship and is jealous of anyone who’s happy.

The other really nice thing about the entries in The Element Encyclopedia of Birthdays, is that there’s a lot of other information that supports the idea of being on a journey or a life path. Regardless of what day Bob was born on, when I write about him on a subconscious level I know that he’s come from somewhere and he’s also got some place to go. Bob is not a static automaton who is a certain way, all of a sudden. After all, characters are not photographs — they’re plants. While you bring them to life in your stories, a good character will always have room to grow.

That, my dear readers, is the trick to adding depth to your character backgrounds. Instead of assigning what you’re comfortable with, look at Bob’s psychology or mindset to figure out character motivations on a spectrum. From there, you can look at multiple options for what Bob might do and free your character from the tried-and-true.

Hey, I think that rhymed! Hrmm, I wonder if I could write a story about a character who couldn’t do anything but rhyme…

The Zombie Feed e-Book Now Available!

The Zombie Feed Volume 1The Zombie Feed, Volume 1 is now available in several e-book formats. My short story entitled, “Tomorrow’s Precious Lambs” is included in this tome and I’ll be reading it at OddCon in Madison, Wisconsin this weekend.

I hope you’ll do me the honor of picking up a copy.

  • TZF Kindle Edition
  • TZF Nook Edition
  • TZF Smashwords Edition
  • For more information about this anthology, feel free to read:

  • Beyond Survival: Living in a Zombie-Filled World
  • The Zombie Feed, Volume 1 Table of Contents
  • Hope you enjoy it!

    Day 2 of 100: On News and Sharing Links

    I’ve always known intellectually that it’s easier to share links through social media, but I had no idea how quickly that would impact me.

    Last night, we had some friends over and they had mentioned this article about how the app pricing model doesn’t work RPGs. Because I hadn’t been on Twitter or Facebook, I didn’t see the article.

    Here’s where it got interesting for me.

    In a typical day, I would have booted up Twitter or Facebook, looked it up on one of their profiles and then clicked over to the article. Since I made a pledge not to use those tools, now if I want the article I have to do one of three things: a) ask for someone to e-mail me the link b) type in the domain name of the article and manually look for it there or c) use natural search to find it.

    Internet http, photo from sxc.huI used natural search and found it pretty quickly, in part because the article was recently published and the domain had good SEO. For articles that haven’t been published in a while that are suddenly popular again? Well, that might get a little more time-consuming because it may not be apparent what the newest or the most popular pages on a website are. Plus, not every website has great SEO. There are some domains I’ve researched for professional reasons that didn’t even rank for their own brand name.

    The other interesting thing about getting a link on Twitter or Facebook, is that I don’t need to rely on asking someone to share something with me that they think is cool. By following people I like, admire or want to learn from, I can see what they’re reading without ever developing a face-to-face connection. Sometimes it’s funny; sometimes it’s informative. Regardless, it’s a potpourri of information that points directly where I’d need to go, rather than house all that information on one website and ask me to take a second or third click.

    Of course, with some of the advances in the web recently, I’m seeing more and more regular websites integrate with Facebook and Twitter. I’m not a hundred percent sure that’s such a good idea because even though those links come through social media, some of the business-related ones (e.g. products and whatnot) look really fake. I’m of the belief that not every website needs to integrate with social media, especially since it’s a cocktail party. In my experiences, social media works best when it’s “natural” as opposed to “engineered.”

    Since I encountered a situation that not only affected me, but forced me to go around social media to find what I’m looking for, I can see the value in these tools is the ease-of-use because it facilitates rapid decision-making. Last week, I would have instinctively known it’s importance not simply based on the one link alone, but the volume of people that were talking, sharing, commenting and interacting with it. While I feel it’s too soon to know if I could recognize that now (e.g. there’s lots of conversations happening all the time about lots of links) the conversation I had isolated the news and not only made it more important to me…but I was more curious about it and wanted to listen because I hadn’t already talked about it to death. The conversation wasn’t a rehash of what happened online; it was new.

    Wow, all that from a single link!


    About 100 Days: From April 4th to July 13th I’m turning the lights off on Facebook, Twitter and IMs for personal use. Read 100 Days: Turning off the Lights on Social Media for more information. You can also read the 100 Days post archive.

    Day 1 of 100: Starscream, a Curse and Why 100?

    *tap, tap, tap* Is this thing on?

    So it’s Monday afternoon and I’ve managed to get through the entire day without even thinking about Facebook or Twitter. Well, until writing this post.

    I’ve also managed to yell at my computer, which I’ve dubbed “Starscream” — twice. The computer name came from a poll I took last week where people on Twitter and Facebook suggested names and then voted on them. It feels like it was the last “fun” thing I did before going dark and I laugh every time I think about this. My office is decorated with all things geek — including a spectacular set of 80s Transformers illustrations which people didn’t even know I had. To my right I have the original Star Wars fan club poster of the Millenium Falcon, a signed Thor print, Soundwave and Blaster. That doesn’t even begin to cover the collection of things on my desk and the other two walls.

    Outside of pouring through the tubes to see reader’s reactions for Paths of Storytelling, I didn’t really use the net for much else this weekend. Reviews… Oh, how I’m wondering what those’ll turn out to be.

    ANYWAY. I digress.

    So… Where was I, again? Oh yeah, the Curse. You know that saying about how people are wrong on the internet? Well, if Damn You, Autocorrect! is any indication, sometimes people aren’t always wrong. Maybe they posted a typo or maybe they were trying to be sarcastic. Truth is, not everyone is dumb yet, when the Curse strikes, that’s exactly how it feels.

    I call it the Curse of Well, Actually. What happens is, is that in our need to get accurate information online, of which there’s sometimes very little, we correct someone using these dreaded words. I’ve done it; others have done it, too. In our desire to find accurate information, though, sometimes this really downplays the person’s intelligence on the other end.

    Why am I bringing this up? Well, after I announced the 100 Days experiment I got some interesting feedback. My fiancee, Matt, declared that I’ll be back on by the end of this week. A few people thought one hundred days was a long time to be off of social media; others wanted to track my progress and see what the results were.

    The obvious question, of course, is why I chose one hundred days. Well, here’s the interesting thing about that. The reason why I picked that length of time, is because rumor has it it takes that long to learn a new routine. What I want, is to do two things before I even start the rest of my day: work out and work on my novel. Period. I need to do these things regardless of how much time I spend on them and what other commitments I have during the day. Otherwise, Argentum will never get done and I’ll continue to feel like a sea slug, even though I’ve been hitting the vegetables hard.

    So that’s the reason behind the length of time. After all, if I want to have a series of novels gracing the shelves of your local bookstore, I have to focus on the work. It sucks, because I do enjoy hearing how everyone else is doing, but there it is. To establish two good habits I need to break a bad one.

    – Monica

    My Site in the Top 50 Freelance Writing Blogs

    Found out my website had been included in a list of the top fifty freelance writing blogs. Here’s a quote from the article:

    In the olden days, freelance mostly referred to sports players in professional leagues who were up for grabs. Nowadays, the term “freelance” has taken on a whole new meaning and can apply to everyone from photographers to web developers. What makes a freelancer different from the average Joe Time Card is that they are self-employed, take on only the jobs they want (or need), and answer only to their clients. — SOURCE: Who’s the Boss? Top 50 Freelance Blogs

    I highly recommend that you check out the link. There are several really good websites in there that I’ve referenced over the years that’ll provide you with great material.

    Enjoy!

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